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What is foreshadowing?

November 09, 2021 by Simon Hawkins in Songwriting, Books

Hey, I'm writing a Christmas song! And this is partly what made me think of this lovely songwriting tool: foreshadowing. 

Foreshadowing is an English language device to drop into a lyric, linked to something used later on in the song.

How does it work? 

Often, it can use many nouns to set up what/who/where/when we are in our lyric. Foreshadowing is linked to plot (which I mention in Song Maps) and narrative, so often used in books or films, and foreshadowing is used to create anticipation, a sense of thinking: 

'Something is about to happen' 

In one of my favorite songs, Three Wooden Crosses sung by Randy Travis, the great songwriters Kim Williams and Doug Johnson used foreshadowing in this. It's is an excellent example of setting up the whole song in verse 1 - introducing five people and a bus (a farmer, teacher, hooker, preacher, and bus driver) who are all on a journey bound to Mexico. And 'the eighteen-wheeler can't stop on a dime.' And the plot thickens in verses 2 and 3.

Interestingly, verse 3 ends up much later in the future with someone else describing this in a story to others, also part of the lyric. It's a fantastic example of saying so much in so few words. And this song uses foreshadowing to quickly introduce the story in verse 1. 

How to use this?

Although 'Three Wooden Crosses' is a story song, foreshadowing can be used in any kind of song, as long as a little bit of planning is done to make this work. In terms of using this device, here are a few steps I'd suggest:

  1. Verse 1: Find the main verbs/nouns and weave them into this verse (i.e., foreshadow them) for them to support the main idea in the chorus.

  2. Chorus: Summarize the main idea. This could even be a very simple chorus.

  3. Verse 2: Move on the story about the verbs/nouns from verse 1, somehow linking to the main idea in the chorus.

  4. Verse 3/Bridge: Move the story on again but try to complete the lyric before getting to the chorus.

These are similar to the Timezones Song Map I mentioned in the book:

Verse 1 - Timezone 1 - the story begins

Chorus 1 - Title

Verse 2 - Timezone 2 - the story moves on

Chorus 2 - Title

Bridge - Timezone 3 or Payoff

Chorus 3 - Title 

And this Song Map is a great way to write with foreshadowing. So it looks like my new Christmas song might be a Timezone song!

Question

What writable ideas in your Idea Bank could maybe be developed using foreshadowing? Do you have any Timezone writable ideas that could be developed this way?

– Simon

www.simonhawkins.com

November 09, 2021 /Simon Hawkins
Song Maps
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Song Maps Highlights #1 — Unmistakable and Unforgettable

September 26, 2020 by Simon Hawkins in Songwriting

“The title is the name of your product, what the listener asks for at the store. Skillful songwriters know how to make a title both unmistakable and unforgettable.”

- Song Maps - A New System to Write Your Best Lyrics, Chapter 3 - What is Song Mapping

September 26, 2020 /Simon Hawkins
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Song Maps Highlights #2 — Moved

September 12, 2020 by Simon Hawkins in Songwriting

“People are deeply moved by: LOVE IN THE FACE OF ADVERSITY”

- Song Maps - A New System to Write Your Best Lyrics, Chapter 3 - What is Song Mapping

September 12, 2020 /Simon Hawkins
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Song Maps Highlights #3 — How to Song Map

September 05, 2020 by Simon Hawkins in Songwriting

“Select a title, Select a Map, Draft a writable idea, Craft a lyric, refine and rewrite”

- Song Maps - A New System to Write Your Best Lyrics, Chapter 4 - How to Use Song Maps

September 05, 2020 /Simon Hawkins
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Song Maps Highlights #4 — Plot Ideas v Story Facts

August 29, 2020 by Simon Hawkins in Songwriting

“With this extra context, we can introduce many more colors, emotions and interest. Much of what we are doing with Song Maps is therefore arranging plot ideas rather than simply ordering story facts.”

- Song Maps - A New System to Write Your Best Lyrics, Chapter 3 - What is Song Mapping

August 29, 2020 /Simon Hawkins
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Song Maps Highlights #5 — Different Sections

August 22, 2020 by Simon Hawkins in Songwriting

“So the ideas presented in each section (other than the Chorus) are DIFFERENT. They move the listener through a journey, they “recolor the Chorus” each time it is heard and cast a new view on it.”

- Song Maps - A New System to Write Your Best Lyrics, Chapter 2 - Five Reasons to Use Song Maps

August 22, 2020 /Simon Hawkins
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Song Maps Highlights #6 — Unlimited Source of Inspiration

August 15, 2020 by Simon Hawkins in Songwriting

“Titles are not copyright protected. So if you were to run down your iTunes songs, they are all up for grabs. If you can think of a systematic way of developing new ideas around those same titles, then you have an unlimited source of inspiration just by looking down your iTunes catalog. Wonderful.”

- Song Maps - A New System to Write Your Best Lyrics, Chapter 2 - Five Reasons to Use Song Maps

August 15, 2020 /Simon Hawkins
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